Exceeds Expectations

"I wake up at 7 o'clock. I eat breakfast with my family. Then, I go to school by bus. I have class in the morning and in the afternoon. I eat lunch with my friends. After school, I go home and do my homework. I eat dinner and then I go to bed at 10 o'clock."

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Key Differences: Uses connecting words (Then, After), adds more detail (with my family, by bus), and uses fuller sentences.

Exceeds Expectations

"In my free time, I like to play football with my friends at the park. I also like listening to music on my phone. On the weekend, I watch movies."

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Key Differences: Provides more specific details (at the park, on my phone) and uses introductory phrases (In my free time).